Thank you to everyone who watched and rated the pilot of my cartoon XETIS!! I'm beginning development of episode two, and I'm listening to feedback. Here are some things I'll address right now:

• The speech bubble/Animal Crossing style speech is staying, but I will modify it to make it easier to take in.
• A bunch of models are going to be revamped for future episodes. Two big things I'm focusing on fixing for episode two are the alien fauna and the computer dude (whos name is Bernard). Plus, each character model will most likely be updated for each episode based on expressions in storyboards and/or general quality-of-life changes related to animation.
• Storyboards will be MUCH more evenly divided between each storyboard artist, and there may be an extra storyboard artist for future episodes. Also, the other storyboard artist for the first episode now has a Newgrounds, so check her out at @gooberthed !!!

And plenty, plenty more in the future. I'd like to frequently post updates both here and on my Instagram. Here's some concept art I have right now!

Peepless Peeper redesign concepts

I hope to share more updates in the future. Thank you all once again!